Log in
Latest topics
Who is online?
In total there is 1 user online :: 0 Registered, 0 Hidden and 1 Guest None
Most users ever online was 201 on Tue Dec 10, 2013 6:59 pm
Top posting users this week
No user |
Top posting users this month
No user |
Timezones
Pacific Time
Eastern Standard Time
Mountain Time
Central Time Zone
South Africa
United Kingdom
Atlantic Time
critique.... cx
5 posters
Page 1 of 1
critique.... cx
Haii
<<< my newest graphic. critique?
<<< my newest graphic. critique?
Cαтту☼- Grand Bear
- Warning :
Posts : 2415
Tickets : 959
Join date : 2014-01-08
Re: critique.... cx
It's good, but the middle picture the grand tiara top is a little cut off. Maybe fix that? Or maybe that's the point of the graphic though.
Hazza- Moderator
- Warning :
Posts : 54446
Tickets : 11407
Join date : 2013-09-17
Re: critique.... cx
Yeah, that was a mistake in the background removal
I shall try to fix it thanksss
I shall try to fix it thanksss
Cαтту☼- Grand Bear
- Warning :
Posts : 2415
Tickets : 959
Join date : 2014-01-08
Re: critique.... cx
I see the text has a different shade of green...? xo I'd make that transparent. Also the cutting of the clothes is something you shouldn't have on a graphic<33334 Last thing is the colour of your clothes don't suit the green background and the background should have a pattern instead of being just a plain green. On the topic of backgrounds you should have made the green a darker shade. Sorry if this is mean but hey! We only imrpove by the mistakes we make <333
Prism- Grand Bear
- Warning :
Posts : 2742
Tickets : 1158
Join date : 2013-09-20
Re: critique.... cx
I love it just like what Hazza said the cutting on the first and second pic is a little off
Aria♥- Royal Bear
- Warning :
Posts : 577
Tickets : 196
Join date : 2014-04-26
Re: critique.... cx
Heyyyoo <33
Your cutting has definitely improved slightly from your previous graphics which is good but there are still some consistent issues? cc:
criticism:
-The background is quite plain, maybe you can add a pattern or something to it?
-I think your BV character and the colouring of this piece don't really work? I'm not sure what you're trying to show here or what even the theme is of it? I honestly believe that all graphics should be showing something whether it be a story or a theme? I think your BV character could be better dressed if she were to match your background. I also think she could be doing a move to make your graphic more energetic?
-I really like the font and the use of the white against the theme but you need to make it work around the image of your BV charrie.
I do indeed like the graphic but it does need work<33 I hope you don't find this too harsh but only with improvement can you get better graphics. But with each graphic you make, you're certainly improving and it's great to see you trying out new things with your graphics! <3
Your cutting has definitely improved slightly from your previous graphics which is good but there are still some consistent issues? cc:
criticism:
-The background is quite plain, maybe you can add a pattern or something to it?
-I think your BV character and the colouring of this piece don't really work? I'm not sure what you're trying to show here or what even the theme is of it? I honestly believe that all graphics should be showing something whether it be a story or a theme? I think your BV character could be better dressed if she were to match your background. I also think she could be doing a move to make your graphic more energetic?
-I really like the font and the use of the white against the theme but you need to make it work around the image of your BV charrie.
I do indeed like the graphic but it does need work<33 I hope you don't find this too harsh but only with improvement can you get better graphics. But with each graphic you make, you're certainly improving and it's great to see you trying out new things with your graphics! <3
anika~- Baby Bear
- Warning :
Posts : 79
Tickets : 75
Join date : 2013-12-03
Similar topics
» Critique? cx
» Critique? c:
» Critique Thread~~
» critique my drawing?
» tfios graphic x critique maybe?
» Critique? c:
» Critique Thread~~
» critique my drawing?
» tfios graphic x critique maybe?
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|
Thu Dec 31, 2020 1:48 am by Olive
» THIS SITE WAS TOXIC ***CHANGE MY MIND****
Thu Dec 31, 2020 1:44 am by Olive
» Post before Abby posts (:
Wed Sep 02, 2020 10:58 am by goCards
» MEANEST MEMBER OF BEARVILLE CITY CHECKKKK
Thu Jun 04, 2020 3:16 am by Hazza
» BC's Official Counting Post! *win tickets*
Thu Apr 09, 2020 1:35 pm by goCards
» BEARVILLE CITY RULES | Please read and agree before posting! | AS OF 3/9/14
Wed Apr 01, 2020 4:09 am by CaliLove
» CaliLove's Admin Application! (hope I get chosen!)
Wed Apr 01, 2020 4:02 am by CaliLove
» RED AND WATER ARE NOT ACTUALLY SISTERS (a thread)
Wed Apr 01, 2020 3:46 am by CaliLove
» rate the siggie above you!
Sun Mar 15, 2015 7:44 pm by Hazza