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Post by BEANIEWILL on Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:38 am


(This story is bearville based, so I'm obviously going to be in it c:)

Prologue -

 I hear whispers surrounding me. It is pitch black, and I cannot see, or hear. As the whispers grow louder, I realize what they're talking about. Me. The whispers turn into laughter, and it is no longer pitch black. I see everyone from my school laughing at me, pointing directly at my face. I am walking through the hallway while they are chanting rude chants. Someone trips me - a person who I know very well - and right before I fall, BAM!

 BRRRIING! BRRRIING! 

 "Macy wake up, it's your first day of Tenth Grade!" Mom shouts excitedly. 

 How could my mom be excited about school? Oh yeah, because she doesn't have to attend it herself. 

 I groan, and force myself out of bed. Woo hoo. Another year of pure bullying and so-called "teasing". As if. These people make fun of me. I put on my outfit, which was a black skirt, and a Sports Rock Monkey Shirt I got from Bearville Outfitters a few years ago. I put on my boots, which I got from Pawlette Coufur Boutique. I adjust my sash, my ice skater muffs and my nerdy glasses. Maybe this year will be different.

 I head downstairs, when I hear a squeal from my mother. "AJ, you're back!"

 Oh no. This couldn't be happening. Especially not today.


Authors Note:


I hope that was an okay prologue, since it was sort of rushed. I will update when I have time, because, well, I'm starting to have trouble with school since I learn from seeing. I can't learn if I don't have my glasses. My eye doctor barely ordered my glasses last week. I was supposed to get my glasses TWO weeks ago. :/ Anyways, I hoped you enjoyed my prologue!

Who's AJ? Why is this so bad for Macy?


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Post by Prism on Thu Dec 05, 2013 4:05 am

LOVE IT!!!!!
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Post by Amber on Thu Dec 05, 2013 9:30 am

this is so good!! more please [:

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Post by Sydney on Thu Dec 05, 2013 10:59 am

moarr<333
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Post by Ally on Thu Dec 05, 2013 11:25 am

include GUYSSS
more longer the chapters Razz
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Post by Colleen on Fri Dec 06, 2013 7:49 pm

Please do more!

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Post by Bri on Fri Dec 06, 2013 7:55 pm

This is really good so far!
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Post by Brooklyn♥ on Sat Dec 07, 2013 10:06 am

MOREEEEEE. 67 
This is so GOOD. 7
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Post by ♥Harmony♥ on Sat Dec 07, 2013 12:14 pm

Amazing!
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Post by Lauren on Sun Dec 08, 2013 2:29 pm

MORE! 6 
sorry for caps. xD
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Post by SantasBaby❅ on Sun Dec 08, 2013 2:31 pm

More !!!!!!!!!! tongue  lol xDD
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Post by Hope on Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:17 pm

im in 6 th grade and im nervous about stating middle school (7th grade ) next year u should keep writing and whos aj?
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Post by BEANIEWILL on Tue Dec 17, 2013 4:55 am


Chapter 1

 "Aj?!?" I asked, huffing. I'm usually not this dramatic, but Aj was a whole different story.

 "Hey Macy," he smiled, acting innocent. What a two faced person. Why did I deserve this out of everyone? 

 "Macy...hello??" Aj questioned, waving his hands in front of my face. "Ready to go to school together?"

 "Uhm, if you didn't notice, look at me. C'mon man."

 "I don't see anything wrong with you," He stated, smirking at me. Why does he have such a little brain?

 "I haven't had breakfast," I state madly. 

 "Does that really matter? I'll buy you some breakfast on the way to school. Bye, Mrs.Angel!" Aj quickly says, dragging me outside.

 "What about my ba-" 

 "It's right in my hand, Macy. You can't help but not think straight around me, huh?" 

 "W-what? Why would I like you?" I answered with a question.

 "I never said that." He winks.

 "Gosh, why did my family's friend have to have such a small brained son?" I muttered. 

 "Hey, I heard that you know!" He shouts at me, slightly pushing me. 

 "Hey! I was joking... even if I do hate you I have to joke around!" I yell back, pushing him back.

 "Well, maybe you shouldn't do that beca-"

 "Hello?!? Aj?!? This is your fault!" I interrupt.

 Here I am, sitting on the muddy ground. Not to mention that there's also leaves in my mouth. I spit them out, only to hear everyone around me laughing. 
Except for AJ.

 "Hey, stop laughing at her! I mean, have you seen your outfit?!? Plaid shirt with polka dotted sweats??" 

 Seriously, our inside "joke"?

 Aj reached out his hand for me, and I grabbed it firmly. I dragged him down with me, making him fall on the mud next to me.
We end up just lying down on a mud puddle, receiving dirty looks for 20 minutes.

 "Macy. Nonononononono." I hear, which makes me sit up.

 "What, AJ?" I ask. 

 "We're late for school. One hour late."

 Okay, so maybe it hadn't been 20 minutes.

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I hope that was a good enough first chapter. Thank you for all the great comments. I know I am not an amazing writer, or an even decent one, but the first step to get better on something is to stink at it. xD I had to write this right after I just finished my project, which took me 4 hours to do! Ugh school. xD But um, yeah, sorry it was a chapter full of dialogue.
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Post by Prism on Tue Dec 17, 2013 8:49 am

I love this (= :DD
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Post by Sparkle<3 on Tue Dec 17, 2013 2:44 pm

Really well written. Smile I love it!
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Post by BEANIEWILL on Wed Dec 18, 2013 2:38 am


Chapter 2

 "Are you serious?!" I ask madly.

 Why do I always have bad luck around AJ? The first time having him here made chaos in my life, not to mention that he- never mind.

 "Look, Macy I'm sor-"

 "Yeah yeah, and you were also sorry when you- forget it. It's not going to make a difference now." I whisper, getting my bags. "See you soon."

 I get up, tidy my clothes, and start running away. Why is AJ such a mess? 


 {AJ's P.O.V}

 "Look, Macy I'm sor-" I start to state, only to get interrupted.

 "Yeah yeah, and you were also sorry when you- forget it. It's not going to make a difference now." She whispers, as tears form in her eyes. 

 She gets her bags, and runs away crying. Why did I have to be such an idiot? I stand up and tidy my clothes, and smoothen my hair.

 "Yeah, you deserve it." My mind tells me. "You broke her last time. Now it's your turn."

 "Well, look who it is." A snobby voice says, disrupting my mind.

 "Hi, Meagan." I madly greet. "Meagan Rose."

 "Hey Aj, what's up?" She flirts, winking at me. "I saw what happened with little miss Macy, she's such a cry baby."

 "H-hey. That's mean to say about her. She's pretty- I mean pretty cool, obviously." I stutter.

 "What are you, a teacher? Hey, AJ, wanna hang out at the Bearywood mall and get some ice cream later?"

 "Uh.. sorry, but I can't go. I-I have to go pick up Christmas decorations with my parents." I just pick up my backpack, and leave Meagan behind. 

 My mind wanders off as I think about the last time I came here. It was so blissful. The memories I had with her, gosh, they were perfect. Then Meagan came into the picture. 
Thanks a lot Meagan. Hopefully I can get her back. Someday, Aj, someday.


 {Macy's P.O.V}

 "Macy. Macy Angel." I introduce myself.

 "Welcome to ELA honor's class, Macy." My teacher greets. "Hey, have you seen Aj Payne today?"

 The sound of his name makes my heart shatter, and makes me feel rotten. 

 I cough. "Yes, I have seen him. He should be here soon."

 And right after I say it, he enters the classroom, looking very, very - don't kill me for thinking this - cute.


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Post by Prism on Wed Dec 18, 2013 2:42 am

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