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Post by Cαтту☼ on Tue May 27, 2014 2:08 pm

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Post by Niall on Tue May 27, 2014 2:37 pm

Your getting much better ! 
I think "catty" could be centered just a bit more, other than that, great job !
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Post by Ally on Tue May 27, 2014 3:17 pm

you asked for it..
Basically:
red arrows: work on your text effects; Use shadows,strokes, inline shadows, outer glows, emboss etc. and make the text more shiny and nice; after all wouldn't you want your name to be the most beautiful of all? Center it in the middle to fit with the design size.
green arrows: Okay there are 2 suns. I'm not sure what idea you wanted to share with us here but i'd suggest to make just one above your name- that could serve as a symbol for example you like the sun or stuff like that , ye know?
Yellow arrows: put your avies to the center and flip the green avatar horizontal so it could be as a mirror way of fading from the red clothes to the green clothes. That would be an ideea. Another one is just to pick one avatar you like more and work with the colors, face etc.
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Post by Cαтту☼ on Tue May 27, 2014 3:38 pm

Thank You Ally and Nialler:24:
I shall edit this graphic ^^ 7
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Post by Accelerator on Tue May 27, 2014 4:04 pm

You are improving ^.^

what graphic program are you using though? I feel like knowing that would help critiquing a lot better xD
I agree with Ally on her suggestions, and a few of mine would be to cut out the avatar a little bitter. PS has this thing called tolerance that can be used to erase better, again knowing what you use, I could be a lot more helpful. I also agree with the idea part, every graphic needs a theme, or more easily, a tone. It doesn't make sense and is not something you can plan out exactly, but it should the general effect you are trying to give. Such as, if you want your graphic to have a gloomy effect to it, you would use darker and cooler tones. The graphic wouldn't have suns or happy flowers. If you want one that is more brighter, you would use the suns, the happy flowers, warmer , and more pastel, tones, and make sure your avatar matches the graphic.


My other advise would be the background, it's too plain. Maybe try adding a few flower brushes, or something like that, the background is a really pretty color, but is really bland compared to the rest. It should showcase the main aspects, but it doesn't need to be just a clean sheet of paper to do that. You can maybe use a gradient of that color, or just add like mint green flowers/butterflies/etc as a border. There is a lot of empty space.


Moving on from the critiquing xD I do love the font that you used, and compared to your previous graphic, I love that you added the suns. It isn't just background/avvie/font anymore, and you can continue to add more things such as that. Good job and Good luck ^.^
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Post by Cαтту☼ on Tue May 27, 2014 4:42 pm

I use foto flex 7  ^^^
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Post by Hazza on Tue May 27, 2014 5:22 pm

You are definitely improving. Um I'm not a graphic expert, but maybe make the text a bit bigger and center it?
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Post by Sydney on Tue May 27, 2014 11:25 pm

wow that's good ;D
i'd just add more effects to the graphic to brighten it up c:
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