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Post by Cαтту☼ on Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:20 pm

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Post by Hazza on Fri Jun 06, 2014 4:47 pm

It's good, but the middle picture the grand tiara top is a little cut off. Maybe fix that? Or maybe that's the point of the graphic though.
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Post by Cαтту☼ on Fri Jun 06, 2014 5:37 pm

Yeah, that was a mistake in the background removal 8
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Post by Prism on Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:27 am

I see the text has a different shade of green...? xo  I'd make that transparent. Also the cutting of the clothes is something you shouldn't have on a graphic<33334 Last thing is the colour of your clothes don't suit the green background and the background should have a pattern instead of being just a plain green. On the topic of backgrounds you should have made the green a darker shade. Sorry if this is mean but hey! We only imrpove by the mistakes we make <333
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Post by Aria♥ on Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:32 am

I love it just like what Hazza said the cutting on the first and second pic is a little off 6
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Post by anika~ on Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:37 am

Heyyyoo <33
Your cutting has definitely improved slightly from your previous graphics which is good but there are still some consistent issues? cc:
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-The background is quite plain, maybe you can add a pattern or something to it?
-I think your BV character and the colouring of this piece don't really work? I'm not sure what you're trying to show here or what even the theme is of it? I honestly believe that all graphics should be showing something whether it be a story or a theme? I think your BV character could be better dressed if she were to match your background. I also think she could be doing a move to make your graphic more energetic?
-I really like the font and the use of the white against the theme but you need to make it work around the image of your BV charrie.

I do indeed like the graphic but it does need work<33 I hope you don't find this too harsh but only with improvement can you get better graphics. But with each graphic you make, you're certainly improving and it's great to see you trying out new things with your graphics! <3
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